Nicole Lynn

This moved fast. There are a few things I would like to point about the story that don’t necessarily fit with the actual world. In the real world students do ...

This was good! When you’re talking about being thrown aside is it the queen that has thrown you away? I can’t really comment on anything else because I don’t think ...

Emily seems to be deeply disturbed. I love the description of the boy, and the way you described the feeling that’s in her. Also the first part made it seem ...

The underlining is to show how the sestina works. There is a certain order the words have to go in.

I liked that this showed how we argue with oursevles. It definitely reminded me of me...though I've never had a boyfriend to be bale to break up with or be ...